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 | Sujet: Like father, like son ? What a joke ! [Foamcoat alias Pelage d'Ecume] Ven 24 Juin 2011 - 14:06 | |
| The atmosphere was healthy. I tried to be as unobtrusive as possible. My breath was short, I put my legs on the ground carefully to be as quiet as I can. I was stressed. Each step was for me a kind of torture. Why ? Because I walked side by side with my father, Foamcoat.
I know what you think. Every son should be happy to walk with his father, it's an occasion to speak about many things, laugh together and get closer. But the only idea to be alone with my father given me cold sweats. Foamcoat was a great warrior and a powerful hunter. Everyone respect him in the Shadowclan. He was a lieutenant attentive and intelligent. And as far as I can remember, he always hate me. It's maybe because I'm not like him. I know very well that I'm a poor shy and fearful warrior. I'm far to look like my father who is the best warrior the clan have never known. Since my young age, he keeps me down and ignore me. But this morning, he called me to do a patrol with him.
I didn't understand. When he called me in front of the warrior's den, I stayed dumb, the eyes wide open. I think I looked a bit stupid because Foatcoam sighed with resignation like if he haven't got the choice. It's a bit true. I was the only warrior in the den. Swallow Pen was with her apprentice in the swamps and Quicksilver was hunting somewhere in the territory. I think Foamcoat would have preferred go in patrol with Quicksilver. He is my brother. And he is better than me in everything. They both look like, they are happy together. In the family's table, I'm like a task. A black dot, an error. Yes a task in there perfect life. Sometimes, I wonder if I'm really Foamcoat'son. We are...so different. Maybe I was adopt. Yes, it's certainly that.
We were walking in the grass without speaking. The only noise was the wind's breath which make dancing our furs. My father walked straight ahead without bothering me. What was he thinking ? I couldn't stand this silence anymore. But I didn't know what to say. We were like two strangers. It was embarrassing.
" Dad ? "
The word echoed thought the silence. I felt uncomfortable. I had to find something to say but what ? I was looking the ground when I got an idea.
" Is it difficult to be a lieutenant ? You have so many things to do... I mean, the patrols, to take care of the others cats. Did you want to be lieutenant when you was young ? "
I wait his answer in looking in his eyes. Maybe it was an occasion to speak together, like a father and his son ?...
[Bon sang c'est pas possible ! Je met trois plombes à trouver les bons mots, à m'exprimer et tout et tout. En plus, je ne suis même pas sûre que tu arrive à retrouver le fil de ma pensée x) Arf, et c'est la première fois depuis longtemps que je me retrouve à compter les lignes xD J'espère que c'est pas trop court, j'avais peur de m'embrouiller et de partir dans un grand charabia en faisant plus long...] |
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Nombre de messages: 572 Âge: 17 Pseudo hors R.P.G.: Pootchy R / Squirrel' Surnom: N'Ecume (mais vous avez le droit de trouver mieux =P) Je voulais juste vous dire que: De tous ceux qui n'ont rien à dire, les meilleurs sont ceux qui se taisent.
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 | Sujet: Re: Like father, like son ? What a joke ! [Foamcoat alias Pelage d'Ecume] Sam 25 Juin 2011 - 18:17 | |
| It was the morning in the Shadow Clan. As every morning, the kittens were playing, watched by their mothers, the Oldsters were talking sleepily and the Warriors were taking their first meal of the day. When he had finished the mouse hunted by the others warriors the day before, Foamcoat stood up and stretched. He had to distribute the morning's tasks to the others warriors, who were waiting for him into the camp, in front of the den. He wanted to go to the patrol, because he knew that no one had gone to the frontier with the Thunder Clan, in the northern plains, since three days. Before choosing the warrior who would accompany him, he distribute all the others tasks : feed the Oldsters, finding some water, hunt … When he finished, he looked at the remaining warriors. There was only one, and the sight of his red coat make him wince. It was Uncertainheart, his son. Puzzled, he looked for Quicksilver, his other son – the good one – but he finally remembered that he wanted to train his apprentice, Lightcloud. He was probably already gone. “That’s why you should sleep a little bit more” a little voice said in his mind. Foamcoat gritted and sent a dreadful look at the red warrior, who was still waiting for his orders. He hadn’t the choice. A solitary patrol wasn’t a patrol at all.
« Okay … Uncertainheart, you’ll come with me for the morning patrol. We’re going to the Northern Plains » he said bitterly, with the hard feeling he was going to regret it.
He watched his son’s face with a blend of despair and tiredness. He seemed thunderstruck, with his half-opened mouth and his frozen body. His father sighed and went straight to the camp’s exit without waiting for Uncertainheart's revival. During all the way to the Northern Plains' frontier, not any word was pronounced, not any look was exchanged between the two cats. That was going to be the most long patrol Foamcoat had ever lived ... It wasn't his fault. This young warrior was the exact opposite of his brother or their father. He was always hesitating, always scared of doing wrong ... And he was red, while all the other cats of the family were of a beautiful grey ! How could it be his son ? Foamcoat sighed again. Finally, Uncertainheart begin to speak, with his shy, wavering voice :
" Dad ? Is it difficult to be a lieutenant ? You have so many things to do... I mean, the patrols, to take care of the others cats. Did you want to be lieutenant when you was young ? "
What was he trying to do ? Was it a joke ? Uncertainheart had never ask him that sort of things before ... His father watched him suspiciously, and gave a short laugh.
« Difficult ? Oh yes, it is difficult, but it's a honour, too. Being a lieutenant, it's giving your whole life to your Clan, and that's why I wanted to be a lieutenant when I was yet a kitten. But I doubt you might understand that. You know ... »
He paused, leaving his sentence pending. He wasn't feeling guilty bullying his son like that. That was a sort of habit for him.
« You know, that's why someone like you couldn't become a great warrior. You don't try to have much than you already have. »
[Mraaw c'est trop chouette de RP en anglais *0* Ca fait complètement changer de style, j'utilise pas les même tournures de phrases ... Et j'ai l'impression que n'Ecumy est encore plus imbuvable en anglais qu'en français x') Ou alors c'est parce qu'il parle à Cœur Incertain ? /PAAAN/ Bref, dis-moi si tu vois des choses qui ne vont pas]
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 | Sujet: Re: Like father, like son ? What a joke ! [Foamcoat alias Pelage d'Ecume] Jeu 30 Juin 2011 - 13:55 | |
| Several hours had past since dawn had woken up the ShadowClan warriors in the camp. From the time sun had started rising in the sky to the very moment when Dawnstar decided to leave her Clan’s basement, she had been watching over her cats, and checking what kind of orders Foamcoat, her strong and brave lieutenant, had already given to the apprentices and the other grown up tomcats. His sense of organization was worthy any other lieutenant’s, and so, once again, the pure white she-cat congratulated herself for choosing him, of all cats, to become chief when she gives up her very last life at her Clan’s service. When the tabby grey cat asked for a hunting patrol, and chose some warriors to go look for some preys, the Clan master decided to take the lead of it. It seemed important to her that her entire tribe saw her behaving as an example for every single cat in the forest. Although she’d have rather slept a little while longer inside her comfortable, dark den, she knew that the survival of her Clan depended on how much preys the wild cats could bring back to the camp. She shook her spotless white fur to get rid of the last traces of tiredness and rose her tail up to give her troops the “go” signal. Wildclaw, Stonefur and his apprentice Cloudpaw were running alongside their leader through the ShadowClan deep swamps, looking for game to kill. The four cats knew exactly where any kind of prey could hide, and recognized every single blade of grass as theirs. They were on their territory, and hereby knew it by heart. No other cat could ever deny it. Cloudpaw caught up a frog, and killed it in the moment. The young pale grey cat would make an other strong warrior, once his training as a ShadowClan apprentice is over ! Dawnstar thought of how many Moons of training would be left before she can make him a true hunter, with StarClan’s approval of course. Now that the war is over, she reminded herself, maybe the Clan can grow strong and powerful again. I wonder how much time it’ll take for us to get our full strength back. On these hopeful thoughts, the emerald-eyed queen captured a last mouse and gave the hunting patrol she led the signal for departure. In a common movement, the four wild cats had got their preys back and started running behind Dawnstar. They rushed through the ShadowClan territory as fast as they could to bring their lunch to the other warriors, surely waiting for them to return at any moment now. Once inside the camp, the white she-cat gazed around herself, willing to know whether the Elders had already been fed or not this day. She spotted Fadinglight, the oldest of the Elders, and asked her if she or the other Elders needed anything. As the old, pale grey she-cat answered negatively, the Clan leader turned back and sprung to the camp exit. If she just hurried up, then she might be able to catch up with her lieutenant and his frontier patrol. She remembered him saying he would go make sure that none of these ThunderClan rats had broken the laws, and crossed the line between the two territories. If Forgottenstar’s warriors poped up on my territory again, I’ll make ‘em pay the price of their mistake myself ! she raged for herself. She decelerated a little when she picked up a familiar smell floating in the air. Two of her warriors were in the area nearby. Then she heard Foamcoat’s voice, laughing meanly at some other cat’s nose. « You know, that's why someone like you couldn't become a great warrior. You don't try to have much than you already have. » he was saying. That’s the moment the green-eyed she-cat chose to show up. She gazed at the tomcat who accompanied her tabby grey deputy, kind of surprised – it was Uncertainheart, his less beloved son, and the one he had always blamed for not being like his brother, Quicksilver. Now, Dawnstar understood why he sounded so nasty with him. But why did he pick him up, while building the patrol, then ? After smelling the air again, the ShadowClan leader noticed that they were alone. Then she got it – they were the two last warriors able to go check the frontier ! All the others’ paws were already full with handling their usual tasks. « Well, ‘looks like I’m coming just in time. I’ll be patrolling with you two, if you don’t mind. So, have you picked up a suspect smell or something ? Like a ThunderClan warrior’s ? Forgottenstar’s cats are a little fast to forget about the forest laws, especially since the war broke out. » She spat her last sentences, her pelt suddenly fluffed up with anger. She would have wanted to ask the proud, tabby, grey cat not to sound so mean when addressing his own son, but had more important things to make sure of, first. For instance, the constant threat of the other tribes was a much more worrisome problem. | HJ: | | | Vive l'Anglais ! *W* J'adore vraiment écrire dans cette langue, et même si je ne fais pas autant de lignes que d'habitude, je trouve que c'est plus amusant. x) Si vous voyez des fautes, n'hésitez pas, surtout, je suis sûre que j'en ai laissé. |
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